Monday, February 13, 2006

My Broken Heart!!

He lay there, dieing in the mud,
his shirt soaked with his own blood.
Nobody had dared to touch him,
even the sun is getting dim.


He is not murdered, he is not killed,
he lay on the dream that he himself built.
To have someone... who he can call 'his'
someone with the beauty like that of 'nix'.

He prayed all day he wished every night,
and soon such a fairy was within his sight.
He wanted to laugh... but he couldn't do,
his sometime seen dream, was coming true.

With his watery eyes, he went to woo the tricky elf,
he lost his consciousness, he lost himself.
Tears rolled down his cheeks,
making his will power somewhat weak.

he kissed the angel with lachrymose eyes,
for he was happy but the world wasn't that wise.
Its the time for them to get apart,
He is none other then MY BROKEN HEART!!

"Tarni"

7 comments:

Emotions said...

yeepieee !!! me first !! me first !!

Emotions said...

WOW !! dis is really an amazing creation tarni.....

all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)

Manish said...

hey ye kya main yahan bhi late.... kya ho raha hai aaj kal... logon ko kuch kaam nahin hai kya... :P

tarni whats this... pehele love phir broken heart... hmmm.....
neways... nice post yaar... but a lil heavy for me... really... broken heart is what ppl don't wanna have :|
Be happy n cheerful
GBU n TC

Anonymous said...

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TARU

MJ

Smokin Joe said...

Have to applause, so much so that i copied this write up of urs and sent it to a few of my friends on mail... thumbs up.. looking fwd to more such.. this is definitely the best of the lot!!! BY far!!

Arti Honrao said...

Broken heart does sing a song taru ...
Cheer up
Main hu na ;)


GBU
Arti

Tarni said...

@ Emotions : You always first yaar!!Great to see you here being the goldmedelist [virtual] :D
Thanks a lot...

@ Neetika : Oh YEAH... I just realised and I thought would wrtite something really stupid...so here is another post for you :)

@ Manish : Oh haan yaar aaj kal subb wele hai koi kaam nahi... but the fact is you are doing over work... come back to normal routine and be the goldmedelist :P
Is it heavy???
Well many people have Broken Heart and some poems are meant to mend those hearts!!

@ MJ : Happy Valentines day MJ... Love you a LOT.

@ Varun : Oh thanks a lot Varun...firstly for dropping by my blog and then for the applause ;)
but whats this sir???you are overviewing the copyrights ...thats sad... Hey Just kidding... you can use any of these writes to share with your friends no issues at all....

@ Aku : Humm Aku... Dil ke tukdhe hue HAZZZAAAAR koi yahaan gira koi vahaan GIRA :D

Love to All

Regards
Tarni