Zindagi ka herek panna
parh ker hum palate rahe,
Her gami her khushi ko
ser aakhon per rakhte rahe!!
Tumne itni berukhi dikhai
Tab bhi payaar samajhte rahe,
Jub zindagi ne jine ko kaha
her pal her ghari hum merte rahe!!
Tumhari aankhoon mein basaya Jahan
ab uss jahan ko dhoond rahe hai,
Jahan thi humari her khushi samayi
ab vo aansoon bhari aankhein moond rahe hai!!
Aansoon aankhoon ki dehlij pe
aaker bhi aaj tak beh na sake,
Dil mein kya armaan kya sapne thea
hum aaj tak kisi se keh na sake!!
Bus zindagi ka harek panna
parh ker hum palatte rahe,
Teri aane ki aahat sunne ko
her din hum taraste rahe!!
"Tarni"
9 comments:
Zindagi ka herek panna
parh ker hum palate rahe,
Teray pyaar ki chaahat mein
Sadiyoon tak tarastay rehay!!
Gum hamay pyaar tha,
ya paar mein hamay gum mila,
issi baat ki uljhan mein,
hum maut say ladtay rahay !!
hum maut ki dehleez par bhi,
unki yaad mein tadaptay rahay,
wo aayay thay kabra par hamari,
lekin kisi aur kay saath nikal liyay.
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Hey looks like I have become a shayar too, ha ha , I know this was a bad piece of writing, but then its a start:-)
-ATG
Another amazing one taru, keep it up :)
GBU
Arti
Awesome!!
Aansoon aankhoon ki dehlij pe
aaker bhi aaj tak beh na sake,
Dil mein kya armaan kya sapne thea
hum aaj tak kisi se keh na sake!!
Man...this couple of lines from the poem were just WOWWW!!
Keep on writing :)
@Anil... the Yogi turning to a Poet??;) a bit confusing Anil.Watch what you are doing and why the this change?? :P
@Aku : thanks Aku!When you are with me i will always write good one!
@Arzoon : Thanks for that Arz.
Regards
Tarni
Tarni ...beleive me, if ur writing all this stuff urself then ur just AWESOME!! [:)]
Dis is too good shayar ji....
vah..vah..vah..kya baat hai !!!
all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)
Yaar, tussi te topper ho,
Har panna parte rahe, aur palatte rahe, aagey badte rahe.
Twaano Neender nee aayi? Kinni kitaabein khatam kittiyan?
Lagda hai hun so gaye ho tussi.
@inverted Moron : :D well thanks for the compliment... and telling you the truth I dont think I write all this... this is what my sub conscious mind or my unconscious mind writes... as if ever you get a chance to know me you would never say that I can write so seriously...
hahahaha
@Emotions : thanks a lot for that emotions... :)
@ My id not me : ;) well ek do to khatam ho gayi... main sirf aarti ki kitabe parhti hoon :P thanks a lot for dropping by my blog!
taru i loved it simply it was a master piece.. soo deep so simply expressed hmm dont have words how much i liked this poem
Ur simply gr8 taru
ab plzz mat pitna ab toh comment kar diya tere se aur tere woh aku bhai se mujhe bahut darr lagta hai :P
take care
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